Comments on: A Valentine’s Day poem wasted, but pretty nonetheless

By: Devon

Devon — Thu, 23 Dec 2010 04:12:11 +0000

I just found a “flaw,” now that you’ve mentioned alliteration… Rays/angel does not match haze/hope and bouquets/bloom… But I’m glad you like it (and that you didn’t find it until you were ready to appreciate it) xo

By: Jacob Woods

Jacob Woods — Thu, 23 Dec 2010 03:50:29 +0000

Just a year ago I started reviewing work on a website called thenextbigwriter.com. I was an arrogant teenage jerk when I first came on. I would have at the time said this sucks. But now that I have come to appreciate poetry more through the process of aging and learning from my mistakes, I absolutely love this poem. Great alliteration and wonderful word choices. Bouquets – Bloom! Love it!

By: Pete

Pete — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 06:48:41 +0000

Devon — This is simply stunning. Getting the complex structure and the message to compliment each other so well is amazing. Pete